As I have been applying to a new school, I have also had to re-write acceptance essays. I thought I would share this one here:
The world is often looked at with a flat and non-dynamic perspective. Many people are concerned only with their local spheres of interest. In the course of my life I have seen many different cultures and people. In addition to being born in Namibia and living in Oxford, England, my family’s travels have taken me to close to twenty other countries. In these travels I have seen shantytowns of South Africa in contrast to the opulent lives of Americans. From this contrast I have noticed that although the African people lack material possessions they are generally happier than their “richer” American counterparts. This observation has led me to ponder what matters in life and has shaped my goals for college. While many go to college with introverted aims I am seeking my degree with hopes to better the lives of those around me and use my education to benefit others.
